Derailed

So, a while ago I talked to some guys at work about joining their little unofficial comic club. The idea is, that everyone creates their own comic and illustrates it, and get together once a month to show some progress and have a chat about that . Well, that's tomorrow, and I started at 6pm today.
So this is what I came up with. It's a total ripoff of this guy El Coro, but hey, I just wanted to get something going. It might change direction 17 times before I get somewhere with it.